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Sunday 30 January 2011
Wednesday 26 January 2011
Highrise: Mazen
This is my compare and contrast essay. It is kind of long so don't fall asleep!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is from a site called http://highrise.nfb.ca/ We had to choose one person from 14 people. I want to talk about Mazen. He is a guy who lives in Beirut and I am living in Korea. Oh! as a tip Beirut is a city in middle Asia. Now I am going to compare my life to his. I found some differences.
First, the countries are in a different position. In Beirut there have been lots of wars and the city is destroyed.
But he doesn't give up. Though to his effort the war is still continuing. Bombs, airplanes and so on. Then he decided to make a song out of the bombing noise. He recorded the bombing noise and transferred in to a trumpet music to cheer him and everyone up. In here Korea you can't even think about bombing and war. Even though Korea is still a divided country. It is not likely to have a war here. I feel sorry that we are living in a such a good environment but we didn't know people were in danger.
Second, in here Korea nearly all of our buildings are in a fine condition.and we don't have to reconstruct everything. During reconstruction, there are lot's of dirt and sand floating in the air. It is never good for our health. But in Beirut there are wars as I mentioned. So lot's of destruction is going on. But we can't just leave the buildings. So in Beirut, lot's of reconstruction are going on .As I said, it is not good for us and the workers in the reconstructing area has to were masks. In Korea on the other hand, we go outside and there are lot's of mountain and fresh air;. So it is not bad as Beirut.
In conclusion my country and Mazen's country is different because Beirut has war and reconstruction but Korea has a better life. I learned that we should also need attention to those countries which is in a bad environment and help them out. It is not good when some people is relaxing and enjoying their life and another is suffocating and fearing everyday. It is just not fair. I think the world should help the countries in war and help people not just caring about themselves.
THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is from a site called http://highrise.nfb.ca/ We had to choose one person from 14 people. I want to talk about Mazen. He is a guy who lives in Beirut and I am living in Korea. Oh! as a tip Beirut is a city in middle Asia. Now I am going to compare my life to his. I found some differences.
First, the countries are in a different position. In Beirut there have been lots of wars and the city is destroyed.
But he doesn't give up. Though to his effort the war is still continuing. Bombs, airplanes and so on. Then he decided to make a song out of the bombing noise. He recorded the bombing noise and transferred in to a trumpet music to cheer him and everyone up. In here Korea you can't even think about bombing and war. Even though Korea is still a divided country. It is not likely to have a war here. I feel sorry that we are living in a such a good environment but we didn't know people were in danger.
Second, in here Korea nearly all of our buildings are in a fine condition.and we don't have to reconstruct everything. During reconstruction, there are lot's of dirt and sand floating in the air. It is never good for our health. But in Beirut there are wars as I mentioned. So lot's of destruction is going on. But we can't just leave the buildings. So in Beirut, lot's of reconstruction are going on .As I said, it is not good for us and the workers in the reconstructing area has to were masks. In Korea on the other hand, we go outside and there are lot's of mountain and fresh air;. So it is not bad as Beirut.
In conclusion my country and Mazen's country is different because Beirut has war and reconstruction but Korea has a better life. I learned that we should also need attention to those countries which is in a bad environment and help them out. It is not good when some people is relaxing and enjoying their life and another is suffocating and fearing everyday. It is just not fair. I think the world should help the countries in war and help people not just caring about themselves.
THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Highrise: Mazen
This is my compare and contrast essay. It is kind of long so don't fall asleep!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is from a site called http://highrise.nfb.ca/ We had to choose one person from 14 people. I want to talk about Mazen. He is a guy who lives in Beirut and I am living in Korea. Oh! as a tip Beirut is a city in middle Asia. Now I am going to compare my life to his. I found some differences.
First, the countries are in a different position. In Beirut there have been lots of wars and the city is destroyed.
But he doesn't give up. Though to his effort the war is still continuing. Bombs, airplanes and so on. Then he decided to make a song out of the bombing noise. He recorded the bombing noise and transferred in to a trumpet music to cheer him and everyone up. In here Korea you can't even think about bombing and war. Even though Korea is still a divided country. It is not likely to have a war here. I feel sorry that we are living in a such a
good environment but we didn't know people were in danger.
Second, in here Korea nearly all of our buildings are in a fine condition.and we don't have to reconstruct everything. During reconstruction, there are lot's of dirt and sand floating in the air. It is never good for our health. But in Beirut there are wars as I mentioned. So lot's of destruction is going on. But we can't just leave the buildings. So in Beirut, lot's of reconstruction are going on .As I said, it is not good for us and the workers in the reconstructing area has to were masks. In Korea on the other hand, we go outside and there are lot's of mountain and fresh air;. So it is not bad as Beirut.
In conclusion my country and Mazen's country is different because Beirut has war and reconstruction but Korea has a better life. I learned that we should also need attention to those countries which is in a bad environment and help them out. It is not good when some people is relaxing and enjoying their life and another is suffocating and fearing everyday. It is just not fair. I think the world should help the countries in war and help people not just caring about themselves.
THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is from a site called http://highrise.nfb.ca/ We had to choose one person from 14 people. I want to talk about Mazen. He is a guy who lives in Beirut and I am living in Korea. Oh! as a tip Beirut is a city in middle Asia. Now I am going to compare my life to his. I found some differences.
First, the countries are in a different position. In Beirut there have been lots of wars and the city is destroyed.
But he doesn't give up. Though to his effort the war is still continuing. Bombs, airplanes and so on. Then he decided to make a song out of the bombing noise. He recorded the bombing noise and transferred in to a trumpet music to cheer him and everyone up. In here Korea you can't even think about bombing and war. Even though Korea is still a divided country. It is not likely to have a war here. I feel sorry that we are living in a such a
good environment but we didn't know people were in danger.
Second, in here Korea nearly all of our buildings are in a fine condition.and we don't have to reconstruct everything. During reconstruction, there are lot's of dirt and sand floating in the air. It is never good for our health. But in Beirut there are wars as I mentioned. So lot's of destruction is going on. But we can't just leave the buildings. So in Beirut, lot's of reconstruction are going on .As I said, it is not good for us and the workers in the reconstructing area has to were masks. In Korea on the other hand, we go outside and there are lot's of mountain and fresh air;. So it is not bad as Beirut.
In conclusion my country and Mazen's country is different because Beirut has war and reconstruction but Korea has a better life. I learned that we should also need attention to those countries which is in a bad environment and help them out. It is not good when some people is relaxing and enjoying their life and another is suffocating and fearing everyday. It is just not fair. I think the world should help the countries in war and help people not just caring about themselves.
THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My 1st 2nd and 3rd person Story!!!!!
Well today I am going to write about my story in a various kind of style of persons. So please
ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1st: Well I love baseball. I play in various positions during the match. I am a Relief Pitcher and sometimes the Starting Pitcher. I play in the 5th or 6th batter when our team is batting.
In the defense I usually do the short stop or the right fielder. I like baseball because it requires teamwork than other sports. I have to sometimes get out for the team or use a strategy than requires a sacrifice. This is also a brain game because you have to predict what strategy is the other team going to use.
2nd: You like baseball don't you?? You can play various positions in the match. Wonderful!
You are a really good 1st baser. You need to have good catching ability because if you make a mistake the batter could be safe. You like this sport because it because It needs a lot of teamwork and strategy. You have to predict what the other team could do.
3rd: He likes baseball very much. He is also very good. He can play in a variety of positions. He plays in shortstop, right fielder 1st base catcher and a pitcher. He is also a powerful batter so he bats in the 5th or 6th hitter. He
says that he likes baseball because he can make friends and baseball needs a lot of teamwork. Sometimes he has to sacrifice himself to the team. He also likes it because it is a strategy game. He has to think of what he will do.
Bunt? Hit? Wait? He likes to think hard too. He has to guess what the other team could do.
ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1st: Well I love baseball. I play in various positions during the match. I am a Relief Pitcher and sometimes the Starting Pitcher. I play in the 5th or 6th batter when our team is batting.
In the defense I usually do the short stop or the right fielder. I like baseball because it requires teamwork than other sports. I have to sometimes get out for the team or use a strategy than requires a sacrifice. This is also a brain game because you have to predict what strategy is the other team going to use.
2nd: You like baseball don't you?? You can play various positions in the match. Wonderful!
You are a really good 1st baser. You need to have good catching ability because if you make a mistake the batter could be safe. You like this sport because it because It needs a lot of teamwork and strategy. You have to predict what the other team could do.
3rd: He likes baseball very much. He is also very good. He can play in a variety of positions. He plays in shortstop, right fielder 1st base catcher and a pitcher. He is also a powerful batter so he bats in the 5th or 6th hitter. He
says that he likes baseball because he can make friends and baseball needs a lot of teamwork. Sometimes he has to sacrifice himself to the team. He also likes it because it is a strategy game. He has to think of what he will do.
Bunt? Hit? Wait? He likes to think hard too. He has to guess what the other team could do.
Wednesday 19 January 2011
Ode " Dear Torch"
Please enjoy my poem
Dear torch
Dear torch
you are my best friend
you shine like a sun
and glows like a moon
you are my helper and my director
whenever the world is dark
you recharge me by showing
what I am seeing
what I think of you and me
you are the key
that leads to the darkened world
your heart is battery
but it is temporary
not with your help
I fall down and yelp
I keep on stumbling
and now I am grumbling
because the P.A.
took my torch away
but whenever you are shining
you are really helping
because the electricity goes out
I have feelings of doubt
I can't see where I am going
and also what I am doing
so please don't leave me
come back where you should be
I loaded your battery
and made a line of boundary
that is of dark and light
you will always do it right
come back come back
or my bones will crack
how I miss you
its not only few
but it is larger than the sea
and only for you and me
I hope you are really listening
because I am expressing
my feelings from everything
I have it in my heart
what I think of you and me
you are the key
that leads to the darkened world
Sincerely Phillip
Sincerely Phillip
Tuesday 18 January 2011
The Wacky Web Tale!
This is from http://www.eduplace.com/tales/ and some words do not make sense but please enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One afternoon David and Julia were walking down a(n) slimy trail, looking for kindling for their campfire. The trees were slow and green, and there were colorful wildflowers all around. David and Julia began to pick the wildflowers, and after a while, they went so far that they had wandered away from the trail.
It started to get dark. David began to get worried, but Julia seemed excited to have an adventure. “Look!” Julia said. “Do you see that pillow? It looks like a house!”
“We're saved!” cried David, who was relieved.
Once they got closer, David felt very uneasy again. It didn't look like the cozy little cottage David had been imagining, but rather a big, spooky tower! It was about 999999999999999999999999 feet tall, and it was covered with purplish grayish blue ivy and moss. It was the creepiest thing David had ever seen!
David said, “Julia, let's keep walking! There's no way I'm going into that tower! It looks haunted!”
“Don't be such a(n) keyboard! We're going in. I think it looks perfectly un-haunted!” said Julia.
David was so scared that he could not open his eyes. He felt his hair chatter as Julia opened the door. All of a sudden, David felt that he was not alone. He opened his eyes, prepared to see the worst. But instead, he saw all his friends and family inside the haunted tower! “Surprise! Happy birthday, David!”
My history presentation "Lorenzo De Medici"
LORENZO DE MEDICI
The House of Medici or de' Medici is a royal house that first began to gather prominence under Cosimo de' Medici in the Republic of Florence during the late 14th century. The family originated in the Mugello region of the Tuscan countryside, gradually rising until they were able to found the Medici Bank. The bank was the largest in Europe during the 15th century, seeing the Medici gain political power in Florence.
Lorenzo de' Medici (January 1, 1449 – April 9, 1492) was one of the Medici family. He was an Italian statesman ruler of the Florentine Republic during the Italian Renaissance. Lorenzo was a diplomat, politician and patron of scholars, artists and poets. His life coincided with the high point of the early Italian Renaissance so his death marked the end of the Golden Age of Florence. The fragile peace he helped maintain between the various Italian states collapsed with his death. Lorenzo de' Medici is buried in the Medici Chapel in Florence. Lorenzo, like his grandfather, father and son ruled Florence indirectly, through surrogates in the city councils, through threats, payoffs, and strategic marriages. Although Florence flourished under Lorenzo's rule, he effectively ruled as a despot and people had little political freedom. It was inevitable that rival Florentine families should harbor resentments over the Medici's dominance, and enemies of the Medici remained a factor in Florentine life long after Lorenzo's passing.
On Easter Sunday, April 26, 1478, in an incident called the Pazzi Conspiracy, a group including members of the Pazzi family, backed by the Archbishop of Pisa and his patron Pope Sixtus IV (fourth), attacked Lorenzo and his brother Giuliano in the Cathedral of Florence. Lorenzo was stabbed but escaped; however the attackers managed to kill Giuliano.
During his tenure, several branches of the family bank collapsed because of bad loans, and, in later years, he got into financial difficulties and resorted to misappropriating trust and state funds.
Toward the end of Lorenzo's life, Florence came under the spell of Savonarola, who believed Christians had strayed too far into Greek-Roman culture. However, Lorenzo played a role in bringing Savonarola to Florence.
With his death, the center of the Italian Renaissance shifted from Florence to Rome, where it would remain for the next century and beyond.
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