Writing Chain " Is Corporal Punishment Necessary" by Class 21

This is the Writing Chain activity we did on writing class in GLPS camp. I expected a formal essay with about 

3 reasons but it turned out to be 4 reasons! I was surprised. Even though I changed some parts it's still the

same. In addition, I give "Thank you" to Um Yu Rim, Son Su Min, Nicky, and Park So En for good ideas.

Now Please ENJOY MY ESSAY AND LEAVE A COMMENT

                    

Is Corporal Punishment Necessary 

Corporal punishment is hitting or physically giving pain. In my opinion, I think corporal punishment is not necessary to punish students because they did something wrong. Some people say that this type of punishment is effective in some ways but I don't agree with the idea.

 First, corporal punishment will even more stimulate students, specially teenagers to behave improperly 

because the students got to dislike the teachers. Also making children's behavior right doesn't need any physical pain but mild behaviors of teachers that makes students trust them.

Second, if one of the student don't want to have school rules, all the other students will do that too. Corporal punishment can the students' body but the students mind will be out of joint.They might not listen to their teachers and can have demos too. You can never know what can happen.

 Third, teachers must keep their student with kind mind. They always say ' It;s for you. This is the hit of love' and so on. But they don't feel "love" to their students in their mind. Teachers just want students not resisting to them.

 Fourth, can you even imagine what would happen if the students "learn" how to hit? Most bullies hit other students because they had learned it from somewhere. The teacher are not getting rid of troublemakers and bullies, actually they are making them.

 Corporal punishment would only give more stress to students, also giving bad impression to students. In conclusion, corporal punishment should be stopped because of these reasons I mentioned.